Monday, October 1, 2012

Thinking out loud about ORNERY PEOPLE



1 October 2012

just a start but I have to start organizing somehow

NOTES ON POSSIBLE STRUCTURE OF ORNERY PEOPLE

After checking family names in the Mountain Meadows Massacre yesterday and learning that some of my Coker cousins were among the murdered, it occurs to me that in ORNERY PEOPLE I might have a structure of

episode + aftermath [very short: a coda]

Then I could have the settlement of North Central Arkansas by the Cokers and (as coda) the loss of several of the grandchildren and great grandchildren in the massacre. 

Then I could have the joyous arrival of the Richardson wagon train in Lauderdale County, Alabama around 1820 and the sacrifice of the children and grandchildren in the war (look at the gravestones!), starting with that youth who recalled how vibrant he had been on the long trip.

I would not always have an “episode + sad aftermath” structure, I hope. But this could be a way of structuring the book, not ever going much past the middle of the 20th century.

The Simms Settlement has to be an episode. Would Barksville be part of the episode and not a coda? Yes. Maybe Absalom’s going back could be the coda, or Grizel’s triumphant remarriage to a Revolutionary hero.

The Ewart clan (Ewart, Knox, Bell, Johnston, Price, and more) fighting at King’s Mountain has to be an episode: the locals joining the Overmountain men. What would the coda be? Aunt Margaret’s ride the day after the battle? No. The determined efforts to acknowledge the family by a connection, C. L. Hunter, in his Centennial book?

Maybe the thing to do is to try this out on a dozen episodes and see how it works.

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