Wednesday, July 3, 2019

Disturbing Reading for the Glorious Fourth in 2019: My 2008 Reflections on CLAREL as Melville's Centennial Poem

                                                                 Clarel: Melville’s Centennial Poem

Hershel Parker


Soon after the Civil War, the victors began planning triumphant celebrations of a magnificent century of American progress on all fronts, political, social, economic, and even intellectual and artistic.  At the great meeting in Philadelphia on July the 4th, 1876, Bayard Taylor was chosen to read aloud his national centennial ode--Taylor, who as a very young man in 1848 had been assigned by a Manhattan hostess to write a valentine for a slightly older celebrity, Herman Melville.  Imagine it is June 1876 and you've bought two little unannotated volumes at Putnam's Manhattan store, Clarel: A Poem and Pilgrimage in the Holy Land, by the same Herman Melville, no longer a literary celebrity but only a Manhattan custom inspector.  If you were taking Clarel slowly, on the 4th of July you might not yet have known that you were reading Melville's own centennial poem, where in the third Part, "Mar Saba," canto 27, a "hundred summers" having run since 1776, tough-minded characters grimly foresee the further downward spiral of the States.  Melville's uncle Thomas had known Joel Barlow, author of the most famous chauvinistic poetic epics of the young Republic, The Columbiad and The Vision of Columbus; here Melville was offering an anti-Columbiad.  That July, after the Glorious Fourth, you might still be progressing purposefully on your modern pilgrimage in the Holy Land when Americans stopped celebrating and snatched up the latest bulletins about General Custer from what the papers called the "Little Horn River."  Indeed, there were distractions enough for anyone who first set out to read this poetic epic for private pleasure in 1876.

Any middle-aged or older American reader in 1876 would have felt more comfortable starting a long poem like Clarel than twenty-first century Americans can feel.  They had grown up reading long poems aloud, evenings, in "the family circle"--or semi-circle around the fireplace.  Families read poems as hard to grasp as Paradise Lost as well as brisker ones like The Seasons, Marmion, The Lady of the Lake, and The Giaour.  Later, at mid-century, families read poems such as  Evangeline (what weeping at the end!), Casa Guidi Windows, and Hiawatha; Melville's brother-in-law John Hoadley even read aloud Longfellow's less popular The Golden Legend.  At the end of the 1860s readers aplenty had been found for Robert Browning's The Ring and the Book, and William Morris's long poems were selling.  Somewhere in the 1870s or the 1880s, there was a tipping point after which readers began expecting great American literature to come in the form of prose fiction, but for Melville, being older, greatness in literature was to be achieved in poetry, and particularly in the creation of an epic poem.  About that time, also, fewer families read poetry aloud together, partly because, in towns, gas lighting and then electric lighting had been introduced into many bedrooms, so one could more easily read privately.  In June or July 1876, no ordinary reader would have been astounded at the appearance of a new long poem in two volumes by Tennyson or Longfellow, although both poets had slowed with age.  The oddity was seeing that the author was Melville, for readers who remembered him did so because Typee had created a sensation thirty long years earlier.  Melville as poet was a surprise to anyone who had not heard of Battle-Pieces (1866).

Nothing about Clarel looked especially intimidating.  A reader would have seen, soon enough, that in the first Part, "Jerusalem" (44 cantos, none more than several pages long), Melville was mustering a diverse company for a pilgrimage over rougher ground than Chaucer's pilgrims traversed.  Their "Cavalcade" out of the holy city begins the second Part, "The Wilderness" (39 cantos), in which the party stops at the Dead Sea.  In Part 3, "Mar Saba" (32 cantos), the pilgrims rest at the remote monastery of that name, then curve to "Bethlehem" (35 cantos) before returning to Jerusalem.  Parts or "books" and cantos were common divisions in familiar poems such as The Faerie Queene, which Melville knew from adolescence.  He also knew long poems where the cantos were in iambic tetrameter, the meter of Clarel, among them Scott's Marmion and The Lady of the Lake and Byron's The Giaour.  For months in the South Seas he listened as his friend John Troy repeated "poetry by the canto, especially Hudibras" (Melville said of "Long Ghost" in Omoo).  Tennyson's "In Memoriam," that most serious of Victorian Faith-Doubt poems, was in iambic tetrameter.  Melville's decision to use iambic tetrameter owed much to Arnold's "Stanzas from the Grande Chartreuse," another Faith-Doubt poem, in which the speaker visits a monastery almost as difficult of access as Mar Saba.  What determined Melville to use iambic tetrameter, however, may have been the phenomenal success of Whittier's Snow-Bound in 1866, a longish poem in that meter which contained passages on country school teaching, cannibalism at sea, and Lady Hester Stanhope's life in the deserts of Lebanon, all topics sure to fascinate Melville.  He could not have escaped seeing extensive quotations from Snow-Bound printed in New York City newspapers and magazines, even if he did not buy the little book.  Whitter had proved that a long-loved metrical form could still be employed flexibly in a popular poem.

Realistically, twenty-first century readers may need to remind themselves that self-reliance, the great American virtue, must be exercised if it is to be secured.  Clarel gives you exercise.  As you read this 18,000 line poem, still the best-kept secret in American literature, remember that Hoadley, that amateur poet and builder of locomotives, read it all in 1876.  Walter E. Bezanson, its first editor, mastered it all by himself.  Self-reliance is admirable as a national last resort, but even Emerson could have profited from a Foreword to Clarel.  Here are my bona fides: on more than a dozen treks I have brought students out of "Jerusalem" all the way through "Bethlehem" without leaving a single straggler wandering in "The Wilderness" or immured in "Mar Saba." It's not easy to get into Clarel, but one sure way is by following the character called only "Vine."  As Bezanson showed, the mysterious, alluring Vine is based on Nathaniel Hawthorne.  In the mind of the young scholar Clarel, Bezanson showed, Vine and another character, the traveler Rolfe, play out in Clarel's mind a kind of "tournament of merits" in which Melville weighs himself against Hawthorne.  Furthermore, the sexually charged attraction toward Vine which the young pilgrim Clarel experiences (in some of the most complexly erotic scenes in our nineteenth-century literature) reflects Melville's tolerant, even amused, analysis of his own early enthusiasms, analysis elaborated in a several-years-long exploration of the appeal of the older man and limitations he was ultimately discovering in him.

Watching Vine with Clarel and Rolfe affords us the high satisfaction of sinlessly participating in literary celebrity gossip, as near as Americans can get to "Julian and Maddalo," Shelley's portrait of himself and Byron, and, I would say, in better poetry than Shelley's in that poem.  The stakes in Clarel are high enough to enthrall any reader with a biographical bent.  Just what will Melville belatedly discover and reveal about his own early and present feelings for Hawthorne?  Just what literary judgment will Melville make now on his friend as artist, two decades and more after he wrote the rhapsodic "Hawthorne and his Mosses"?  With Hawthorne dead (in 1864) and no Bezanson on the scene to recognize a real man behind the character, just how fairly will Melville play?  Circumstances made playing fair a supreme test of Melville's character.

For readers free of suppressed sexual needs like Clarel's, Vine is by no means the most compelling pilgrim in Clarel.  Lured in by the promise of celebrity gossip, you soon enough may become more intensely ATTRACTED to Rolfe, Nathan, Mortmain, Ungar, or another among the powerfully sketched characters.  Some of these characters may have lived much longer in Melville's fictionizing imagination than Vine.  When Melville visited Hawthorne at Liverpool and Southport late in 1856 their relationship was back on its old footing fast enough, so that the visit was for Melville a gratifying part of the present, not a perturbing part of the past.  Both men seemed to be in mid-career, despite Hawthorne's absorption in his work as American consul at Liverpool.  Melville even left Hawthorne in charge of seeing The Confidence-Man into print in England.  Perhaps late in the trip, perhaps a little afterwards, Melville drew on his Mediterranean tour while planning Frescoes of Travel by Three Brothers.  There he would portray Rousseau, Cicero, Byron, and Haydon, the four associated with, or weighed against (a heavily drawn bow-shaped brace suggested) Venice, Olympus, Parthenon, and Leonardo, although his notation left unclear whether Cicero was to be played off against or paralleled with Olympus, or Haydon put against not a place but a great man, Leonardo.  Hawthorne had no place in Frescoes; he was alive, and Melville's own mood was not retrospective except in historical terms, not personal.

In 1860 if his first collection of verse, the lost volume called Poems, had been published as planned, Melville would have entered the British field of modern poetry occupied by Tennyson and the Brownings, not the American field where he would have been measured against Bryant, Whittier, and Longfellow.  "After the Pleasure Party" would have marked Melville as engaged with a Tennysonian preoccupation (education for women and female sexuality) and the variously titled poem "Morning in Naples," or "Afternoon in Naples" (in which the speaker recognizes the political tyranny under which the populace lives in apparent joyousness), would have marked him as a poet of the Risorgimento, like Elizabeth Barrett Browning.  A quick learner, he had gone from the occasional gaucheries of Typee to the sustained grandeur of Moby-Dick in less than seven years.  In London (where praise meant something) he had been acknowledged as a master of prose for a full decade before he started to make himself a poet in 1857 or 1858. How long does it take for a great prose writer to become an accomplished poet?  Best to trust Melville's judgment: he thought he was a poet in 1860 when he left Poems for publication as he boarded the Clipper ship Meteor, captained by his younger brother Thomas, intending to round Cape Horn then sail and north to San Francisco and afterwards cross the Pacific to Calcutta.

By the time they sailed up the Pacific Coast of South America and Central America, Melville had every reason to be sure that he was officially a poet, already published in New York City.  To judge from the poetic epics he carried and his marginalia in them, he was ambitious to step beyond his previous achievement, ready to undertake an epic poem.  After his return from the Mediterranean Melville had become obsessed with classical history and philosophy.  In April 1859 two Williams College students called on Melville unannounced, both primed by Pittsfield gossips to disapprove of the author.  One decided that Melville "was evidently a disappointed man, soured by criticism and disgusted with the civilized world and with our Christendom in general and in particular.  The ancient dignity of Homeric times afforded the only state of humanity, individual or social, to which he could turn with any complacency.  What little there was of meaning in the religions of the present day had come down from Plato.  All our philosophy and all our art and poetry was either derived or imitated from the ancient Greeks."  The companion described the same "full tide of discourse on all things sacred and profane," but exclaimed, "what a talk it was!"  Already, before he finished Poems, Melville was holding forth on themes which he expressed in Clarel.  He went so far as to try his hand, likely on the voyage on the Meteor, at a mythic-historical Hawaiian story which would draw classical-Polynesian parallels, but he found it uncongenial and dropped it.  Whatever he might choose to write about during the epic voyage to Calcutta, Melville was ready to surpass Poems.

News in San Francisco dashed Melville's ambition, for there was no printed and bound volume waiting for him.  Poems had been rejected by at least two publishers, and an unpublished poet with a wife, four children, and no income hardly has a right to undertake an epic.  Furthermore, Thomas had received orders to sail back around the Horn to England rather than to cross the Pacific.  There was no point in Melville's staying with his brother.  After arriving home by the Panama route, Melville seems to have put the bulk of his 1860 poems aside for years (if he did not destroy some of them), although textual evidence shows that he kept trying to work current events in Italy into one poem from this period or from the very early 1860s, "At the Hostelry."  He never stopped writing poems for long, even if they were no more ambitious than short "Inscriptions" for the Civil War dead.  Battle-Pieces is frequently called Melville's first book of poetry, and critics speak of his turning from prose to poetry in that 1866 book.  No, Battle-Pieces was his first published book of poetry.  Melville was not a novice poet in Battle-Pieces.  When he at last started his epic poem, Clarel: A Poem and Pilgrimage in the Holy Land, a little over two years after becoming a customs inspector in New York City, Melville had been a practicing poet a dozen years.

Dating the start of Clarel is both straightforward and tricky.  From the records of Melville's buying source books, Jay Leyda and Leon Howard decided that Melville began Clarel in January 1870.  My less conventional findings confirm their conclusions.  While rightly focusing on books like W. H. Bartlett's Forty Days in the Desert, Leyda and Howard slighted other books Melville saw and sometimes bought in the years around 1870--books by or about Hawthorne.  Leyda in 1951 plundered Hawthorne's posthumous Passages from the American Notebooks (1868) and Passages from the English Notebooks (1870) for their evidence about the Hawthorne-Melville relationship in 1850 through 1857: these were, after all, contemporary records belatedly published (although with tantalizing ellipsis dots where Sophia Hawthorne withheld portions of what Hawthorne had written).  While expanding The Melville Log in preparation for my biography, I realized that Leyda had not recognized a crucial fact of Melville's life--that encountering each Notebook on publication and each other posthumous work by Hawthorne (and each book about Hawthorne), were momentous events in Melville's life in the late 1860s and the early 1870s, when his friend was regularly ranked in newspapers and magazines as the greatest American writer. Reading about himself as a man who was memorable because he had known Hawthorne in the Berkshires, reading passages quoted without his permission from his own intense letters to Hawthorne, the now obscure custom house inspector began to relive the friendship between himself at the time of Moby-Dick and his Lenox neighbor, the impoverished romancer, but he also began to analyze their relationship from the perspective of the present.

Having assembled an array of Melville's encounters with the posthumous Hawthorne, I suggested in the Northwestern-Newberry Clarel (1991) that the decision to take Hawthorne along on the pilgrimage may have been the catalyst that let Melville begin work on the poem when he did.  I was nearer right than I knew.  Later, while looking in Lawrence, Massachusetts, papers for information about Melville's brother-in-law John Hoadley, I found an unknown letter signed "Maherbal," reprinted from the Windsor (Vermont) Journal, a description of the Hawthorne cottage near Lenox about the time the writer moved out, in November 1851.  Where there is one letter to a hometown newspaper, there may be more.  After five years Richard E. Winslow found a file of the Journal for me, and in it another letter describing a meeting of Melville and Hawthorne alone together in the dining room in a hotel in Lenox, gawked at through the doors by locals--surely a meeting in the Little Red Inn (later known as the Curtis Hotel), where Melville's father-in-law Judge Shaw stayed every September, when he held court.  The Lenoxites were titillated by the glimpse of celebrity authors, both reclusive, but they were also shocked, for local men simply did not dine together at the hotel, as men could do at the Parker House in Boston or the Astor House in New York.

We Melville scholars had not asked the obvious question: how did Hawthorne get a copy of the just-published Moby-Dick in time to write Melville about it on the 15th or 16th of November 1851?  What an author like Melville does when he dedicates a book to another man is hand him a copy and watch his face when he sees the dedication. For me as biographer, the meeting proved to be one of the great bonuses bestowed by the Goddess of the Archives, at first because it provided a seemingly inevitable conclusion for the first volume.  Yet as even simple documents can do, this one set off an explosion far away, once I paid attention again to an item in the 20 September 1869 Springfield Republican which Leyda had quoted in the 1969 "Supplement" to The Melville Log: "Among the notabilities who have been summering at Curtis's hotel in Lenox . . . Herman Melville of New York."  In the early 1990s I obtained the full article for my expansion of the Log: "Among the notabilities who have been summering at Curtis's hotel in Lenox are Mr Bille, the Danish minister, Capt H. Stockton of Newport, R. I., Mr and Mrs W. H. Phillips of Washington, R. S. Oliver of the United States army, Judge Skinner of Chicago, Herman Melville of New York, Col Schuyler Crosby, United States army, R. Rangabe, charge d'affairs for Greece, Henry Cram of New York, Gen John A. Dix and family of New York, William A. Neil and family of Ohio, C. C. Harrison and E. E. Connor of Philadelphia, and S. B. Schlesinger and Col C. P. Horton of Boston."  In 1869 the old dining room remained, the hotel not yet inflated into a Victorian behemoth.  Overshadowed by post-war plutocrats, his own old fame submerged into that of an adjunct to Hawthorne's fame, Melville sat again in the dining room which had witnessed the highest moment of triumph in his life, the moment his friend read the dedication of the new book.  Could anyone doubt that Melville remembered that afternoon in November 1851?

In order to show how these documents about November 1851 and August 1869 confirm what Howard and Leyda said about Melville's starting Clarel, I need to describe something less tangible than newspaper articles--a tendency of Melville's to experience a peculiar mental state when disparate times, places, and people collided.  Most of us, perhaps, share this psychological tendency with Melville, but he apparently experienced this state with abnormal strength, in his life, and in his writings he described it sometimes in quasi-hallucinatory or downright hallucinatory ways. In Omoo, Chapter 27, on the beach at Tahiti Melville recognizes that a wrecked ship is from a town on the Hudson River below Albany: "In an instant, palm-trees and elms--canoes and skiffs--church spires and bamboos--all mingled in one vision of the present and the past."  In Pierre at the end of Book 4, "Retrospective," the portrait of Pierre's father and the face of Isabel melt into each other and "interpenetratingly" unite.  An example of this phenomenon occurs in Israel Potter, and others suffuse "The Paradise of Bachelors and the Tartarus of Maids."  An abbreviated version occurs in "Bethlehem," canto 26, where Clarel shares a bedroom with the sensual Lyonese, whom he finds challengingly masculine although he wears his hair in chestnut curls like a Polynesian girl's.  Clarel dreams that he stands between the Lyonese and the "pale pure monk," Salvaterre, introduced earlier, and feels "the strain / Of clasping arms which would detain / His heart from each ascetic range," arms not identified as the Lyonese's, the monk's, or his fiancĂ©e Ruth's.  Awake, Clarel experiences the beginnings of organic change in his attitude toward sex.  Typically in Melville, an image of one object, place, or person superimposes itself upon another, the images dissolving back and forth, exactly what we could call "morphing."

Having learned of the memorable meeting in the hotel in 1851 and the return visit in 1869, and knowing Melville's habit of playing off one time against another, I had to allow for the power of Melville's memory.  Whether or not Melville "saw" Hawthorne in the dining room at the Curtis Hotel in 1869 (morphing, for instance, into the head of General Dix or Colonel Crosby or whoever sat where Hawthorne had sat), he remembered.  Chances are that Melville then brooded through September, October, November, and December over how he could come to terms with the utter failure of his own career and with the Hawthorne now exalted to the highest American literary empyrean.  By January, having deciding that the way to work out his analysis at a bearable pace was to take Hawthorne along on the "pilgrimage," Melville started buying source books for Clarel.  Conventional evidence of book buying, new documentary evidence of one memorable new meeting in 1851 (added to earlier-known documentary evidence of his being at the same place in 1869), and the recognition of a psychological compulsion--all these work together to date the start of Clarel as around January 1870, just as Leyda and Howard had thought.

But, you ask, what kind of man on the basis of collision of past and present suddenly decides one day to write a book he had not thought of writing, or to introduce a main character into a book he may have been pondering about?  Well, a man like Melville.  In 1849 Melville began the wholly unplanned Redburn just after an emotional, and perhaps all but hallucinatory, re-enactment of a momentous life-event on the docks of Manhattan, his seeing off his younger brother Tom (who looked so much like him) on a voyage to China ten years after their older brother had seen him off to Liverpool (Parker 1.636-37).  Melville was naive in not recognizing the dangers of writing about childhood, especially a childhood scarred by sudden loss of fortune, flight upriver to a remote city, death of the father, and abrupt descent into poverty.  By the time he wrote the last parts of Pierre (NN, p. 284), he knew that when one drops a fishing line into the well of childhood what he pulls up may be monsters.  Melville's precipitous psychological development--the development that allowed Moby-Dick and Pierre--came because he wrote Redburn just when he did, under the impetus of such a powerful collision of memory against the present.  One would not expect such precipitous psychological development in a man in his early fifties, even if he began writing because of the collision of memory and the present, but where Melville grew most during the writing of Clarel, other than in greatness as a poet, was in his capacity for sustained psychological analysis--a capacity manifested long before in Pierre, but, one could argue, pursued here to depths even more profound.

The force that kept Melville tightly buckled to the task, at least in the first two or three years, may have been his need, reinforced at intervals by new Hawthorne publications, to come to terms with his powerful feelings about Hawthorne in the present, not only feelings from two decades earlier.  For my biography, after looking hard for anything that could be tied to particular personal or public events starting in 1870, I took the rough and ready approach in describing the composition.  I treated "Jerusalem" in part of the chapter on 1870, "The Wilderness" in 1871, "Mar Saba" in 1872, and "Bethlehem" in 1874, working the discussions of Clarel into my biographical narrative.  That narrative was partly drawn from newly discovered newspaper articles but mainly from long-known letters in the NYPL and from a host of other manuscript letters which had long lain there unread.  Despite all the vicissitudes Melville experienced (double griefs so great in 1872 that he may not have written much for many months), I assumed, partly just for convenience of sorting out what I said about Clarel, that he most likely did not write much more or less than a Part each year up until he finished, some months into 1875.  (We had long known that the poem was finished by the summer of 1875, when Melville's uncle, Peter Gansevoort, offered to pay for its publication.)  In the portions of these chapters devoted to the poem, my strategy was to follow Melville's portrait of Vine which gradually included judgments on his intellect.  As the poem progressed, Melville engaged more intensely with characters who themselves were more urgently involved in present life and thought than Vine--Rolfe and Ungar in particular.

This remarkable cast of characters in Clarel grew out of Melville's solitary reading but also by occasional intense conversations with men who had seen much of the world and had pondered on what they had seen.  From Liverpool in November 1856 Melville wrote his brother Allan about a man he did not name (it was George Campbell Rankin) who had crossed on the Glasgow with him: "there was one man, who interested me considerably, one who had been an officer of the native troops in India, and besides was a good deal of a philosopher and had been all over the world.  With him I had many long talks." Melville also was a man who had been in far corners of the world and was a good deal of a philosopher.  By focusing too often on him in mid or late career as a prose writer, from Moby-Dick to a few of the short stories, we forget that early in life he had been an eyewitness to history in the New World and the Pacific and was uniquely qualified, by experiences and by voracious reading, to take on great topics of the century.

No other important American writer lived for weeks anywhere with a primitive tribe almost untouched by western civilization, as Melville did in the Marquesas.  From the experience Melville gained a permanent, instinctive sense of cultural relativity, whether Polynesian, Christian, Muslim, the Greece and Rome of myth and history, or other societies.  America was not ready for cultural relativity: fundamentalist reviewers exacted a high price for Melville's allowing Ishmael to worship Yojo with Queequeg.  But equality of myths and religions is a recurrent theme in Clarel.  In "Jerusalem," canto 33, Homeric sites and Christian sites seem equally real.  In "The Wilderness," canto 5, the young Smyrniote Glaucon shocks Clarel with his lack of either historic or religious awareness: "Fine shot was mine by Nazareth; / But birding's best in Tempe's Vale."

No other important American writer witnessed colonialism and imperialism first hand, as Melville did when the French admiral on his warship thuggishly declared the Marquesas to be French property or when the British, under pressure from the American president, relinquished control of the Hawaii.  No other American writer reported on the devastation which followed Europeans into the South Seas--systematic destruction of native cultures, natives left prey to European diseases, the islands themselves vandalized by new construction which destroyed essential tropical vegetation and natural features such as coral reefs.  Ungar bursts out ("Bethlehem," canto 9) against those who "in the name of Christ and Trade" deflower "the world's last sylvan glade!"

No other American writer exposed the human and physical costs of Christianizing the South Seas, particularly in Hawaii, where natives were hitched to go-carts to pull missionaries' wives about the island, and lashed.  Low church reviewers (that is, the missionary-minded Presbyterians, Congregationalists, and Methodists) savagely denounced Melville as the traducers of missionaries because he described in the first issue of Typee just what he saw in Tahiti and Hawaii.  Telling what he knew, first hand, cost Melville his career because of the virulent power of what we would call the religious right.  The "solid stolid Elder" who rejects the party and turns back to Jerusalem ("The Wilderness," canto 10) would, given the chance in the 1840s, have brutally denounced the author of Typee and Omoo.

Melville's unique experiences as eyewitness to history occurred during the more than two years he worked in one of the largest American industries, the slaughter of whales in order to light the lamps of the Young Republic, before he served more than a year as a sailor on an American man-of-war.  Other Americans served on whaleships, merchant ships, and naval vessels and wrote (and wrote well) about their experiences, but no other American writer of his time, not even Richard Henry Dana, Jr., had Melville's varied experience with living in extremely close quarters for  prolonged periods with men of different races and nationalities.

For all his unique experiences, Melville brought to Clarel a life crowded with experiences shared in some degree by some of his contemporaries, including the great English poets of the mid century and beyond.  He was far from unique in seeing Paris less than two years after the revolution of "the red year Forty Eight" ("Mar Saba," canto 1), which he wrote into both Mardi and Clarel.  Margaret Fuller and other Americans had been on the scene in Italy for that red year, and other Americans witnessed other battles, other years, while Melville went the length of Italy in 1857 witnessing shows of force but no military engagements.  Still, he saw enough of post-Revolutionary Europe to affect his thinking.  He had grown up when Edmund Burke's Reflections on the Revolution in France was still battling with Thomas Paine's rejoinder, The Rights of Man, and all his life the first French Revolution remained the archetypal modern revolt, almost as powerful as Satan's against God.  He knew that the United States, the result of the revolution won by his two grandfathers and their fellows, was an experiment which might fail.  From what he saw in France and in Italy and from his readings and broodings Melville created Mortmain in Clarel, an archetypal revolutionary become disillusioned with the hope of social reform through overthrow of governments.

Melville had little experience with Catholicism, other than being defended by some Catholic reviewers who were delighted at his criticisms of the Protestant missionaries in the South Seas, but he knew from American magazines and newspapers of "the ecclesiastical crisis" in England and knew something, most likely, about John Henry Newman's turning to Catholicism.  In Clarel Rolfe suggests that Protestantism, in the grand battle between Roman Catholicism and "the Atheist," would not be a contender for dominance: Protestantism would figure only as a base of operations covertly used by Atheism ("The Wilderness," canto 26).  Taught the doctrine of total depravity by his mother's Dutch Church, Melville carried the lurking idea of Original Sin along when he married into a Unitarian family.  More than any other poet of his time, he was tormented by the wish that one could obey Jesus absolutely (as in what Jesus said to the rich young man) and by the certain knowledge that any attempt to put Jesus's words into practice would end in disaster.  Christians were not Christians, by Melville's standards, and in a similar mood Ungar argues ("Bethlehem," canto 18) that Christianity is only nominal, without "working practice."  Worse is Rolfe's depiction of Christianity as a victimizing confidence game ("Mar Saba," canto 3).  Rolfe thinks that Christ may have been the "last and best" avatar of godhood but that men "Made earth inhuman; yes, a den / Worse for Christ's coming, since his love / (Perverted) did but venom prove" ( "The Wilderness," canto 21).

Clarel was timed to be Melville's centennial poem, his skeptical testament about the state of the country his two heroic grandfathers had helped to create, a counter-demonstration against public self-congratulation.  Melville gave his strongest characters (Americans, almost all) some of his own deep respect for those who remember the past and apply it to the present: "Historic memory goes so far / Backward through long defiles of doom; / Who consults it honestly / That mind grows prescient in degree" ("Bethlehem," canto 21).  Rolfe proposes ("Bethlehem," canto 21), "the New World's the theme."  The talkers find themselves dismayed by agreeing that the New World of the Americas had been swiftly despoiled, and Ungar, Rolfe, Vine, and Clarel all silently lament "the arrest of hope's advance, / And squandered last inheritance" ("Bethlehem," canto 21).  The new Paradise opened by Columbus and the Paradise Magellan found in the Pacific are not fit subjects for a Paradise Lost but only for a Paradise Squandered. Vine will offer only "Grudged thanks" to Columbus ("The Wilderness," canto 27), and the American pilgrims at the end can think of offering sacrifices to only Terminus, the god of limits, not the god of opportunities ("Bethlehem," canto 21).  Disillusioned, dismayed, disheartened, the pilgrims nevertheless elevate our spirits.  It is a great privilege to be in their company for so long, to hear them speak so intelligently in what we begin to take for granted, some of the best American poetry ever written. 

Twenty-first century survivors of this paperback can seek out, later on, the full Northwestern-Newberry edition (1991), which reprints Walter E. Bezanson's monumental introduction and notes to the 1960 Hendricks House edition.  The NN volume includes also a historical supplement and monkey ropes and hoist posts aplenty, including glosses that pile Harrison Hayford's Pelion atop Bezanson's Ossa, evocative black and white orientalist period illustrations, and tantalizing related documents.  Not yet sated, you can dip into five chapters of Hershel Parker's Herman Melville: A Biography, 1851-1891 (Baltimore: Johns Hopkins, 2002), one for each Part of Clarel and a fifth on the publication and reception.  New discoveries are in Parker’s Melville Biography: An Inside Narrative (Evanston: Northwestern University Press, 2012 [out in January 2013], in Chapter 17, “Melville and Hawthorne’s Dinner at the Hotel in Lenox” and Chapter 18, “Why Melville Took Hawthorne to the Holy Land: Biography Enhanced by Databases and an Amateur Blogger.” Bezanson in 1960 had Melville's copy of the Arnold, from which he gave an exemplary reading of Melville's grappling with aesthetic issues.  Books from Melville's library keep surfacing, especially since the late 1970s ; literary artifact though his introduction was, Bezanson could not resist working in a bit from Melville's recently discovered Dante.  We know more all the time, and for an up-to-date interim report the truly insatiable reader can go to Parker's Melville: The Making of the Poet (Evanston: Northwestern University Press, 2008), which shows Melville the autodidact copying from and arguing with a world-class teaching staff--Dante, Vasari, Cowley, Wordsworth, Jeffrey, Hazlitt, Arnold, Ruskin.  Listening to Melville in his marginalia, you love the man, and seeing how he grew beyond his great course of study in aesthetics (in 1862), you may catch the Clarel fever as strongly as I have. 

You will know you have the fever if you begin to feel edgy, vaguely dodgy and sore, as you move into Part 4.  Then you realize that you are coming to the end and pretty soon there won't be any more.  Whatever Vine and Clarel had to say, whatever Rolfe and Mortmain or Rolfe and Ungar had to say, that's going to be all there is.  Having listened for hours as Melville and Oliver Wendell Holmes discussed East India religions and mythologies "with the most amazing skill and brilliancy on both sides," the diplomat Maunsell Fields declared, "I never chanced to hear better talking in my life."  Remember that one of the students visiting Melville in 1859, having been lectured too long on Plato and Aristotle, nevertheless exclaimed, "what a talk it was!"  You can overhear great talk throughout Clarel, even before the journey is quite underway.  Reading Clarel, you echo Maunsell Fields.  Whoever you are, you may never chance to hear better talking in your life.



Supplemented from the Foreword to the 2008 paperback of the NN Edition of Clarel




Monday, July 1, 2019

Part of Cousin Leon Harris's transcription of Christian Dellinger's Revolutionary Pension Application


Christian Dellinger, veteran of Yorktown, dead in 1856 at 92

Edgefield (SC) Advertiser 15 October 1856
One of the Dellingers who did not go down the Great Wagon Road.

Riverside CA PRESS 15 March 1938--Okies, Mexicans, Anyone Who is Poor





 


"The Excessive Rationality of W. W. Greg's 'Rationale of Copy-Text'"


As delivered at the South Central MLA 1983
The Excessive Rationality of Greg's Rationale:
Authorial Intention and the Determinacy of the Creative Process.

I want to begin with the old bibliographical cliché of "soiled fish" and why that single-word compositor's error in a 1920's reprint of WHITE-JACKET had such an extraordinary vogue in textual discussions for so long as it did. Of course the fact that a famous critic, F. O. Matthiessen, on the basis of the typo had been seduced into an extravagant tribute to Melville's unique style had a lot to do with its vogue. But the real reason everyone from Harkness to Bowers made so much of the error was that everyone was acting as if textual corruptions came in the form of single-words, a misreading, a typo, or else a pair of variants. If you search the literature of our field in the 1950s and 1960S you will see that no matter what complex textual situations people knew about, they regularly talked in terms of single-word corruptions or pairs of variants, and they didn't at first have many interesting examples of either. Look at the dull mileage Bowers tried to get out of routine corruptions in late reprints of The Scarlet Letter. We were at the level of saying to the fancy critics (Oh, so much better paid than we were and so much more respected), that, hey, really you ought to pay attention to us, because sometimes you might end up making a little mistake like Matthiessen did.

We were not at the stage, then, of saying, as we now can, for example, that every piece of criticism ever written on the theme of slavery in PUDD’NHEAD WILSON is largely wasted effort because every critic who has written on the topic has assumed that slavery is a theme throughout the book, when in fact some of the middle chapters survive, unrevised, from a stage when race was not a theme in the book at all and the villain was all white; or of saying, as we now can, that every critic who has written on the ending of THE RED BADGE OF COURAGE before 1978 had to a large extent wasted effort in trying to criticize something which was cut so it would not plainly mean what Crane wrote it to mean but was NOT rewritten to make it plainly and definitely mean something else; or of saying, as we now can, that the reason even the fine critics of Norman Mailer (and he has had marvelous critics, despite the perversity of some early reviewers) have never been able to do something so simple as say who the main characters are in AN AMERICAN DREAM is just because you can't tell, from the book version, who they are. Now we are at the position of saying, as sweetly and winsomely as we can, that in many cases all literary criticism has been more or less wasted because of a flawed text. (And it doesn't matter how fine the critic is at all—look at the cheap thrills Wayne C. Booth has in celebrating adventitious aesthetic effects in the Cowley edition of TENDER IS THE NIGHT.)

That's very far from where we were back in the 1950s, when no one seemed really to believe that there were, seriously, aesthetic implications of textual evidence--and biographical evidence. For my present purposes, the important point is that back then we all talked about textual corruptions as coming in tiny forms, usually one word errors, and that it was that way of thinking about textual corruptions that allowed us to make scripture of W. W. Greg's “The Rationale of Copy-Text” in the years after its publication in the 1949-50 STUDIES IN BIBLIOGRAPHY. Greg works perfectly in cases of such one-word corruptions. In the PROLEGOMENA TO THE OXFORD SHAKESPEARE, you recall, Ronald B. McKerrow had realized that the first edition (assuming that no manuscript was extant) should be copy-text rather than a later reprint based on it, and he realized that you could often identify authorial readings in later reprints and emend them into the first edition, thereby keeping the first edition's closeness to the writer's' spelling and punctuation and of course keeping the overwhelming number of authorial words but also gaining the advantage of correcting the text at particular points where a later text contained a restoration or an authorial revision. Not having thought through the problem of how to deal with the variants in a late text which plainly contained some authorial corrections or revisions, McKerrow rather haplessly concluded that the editor who identified authorial variants in a later edition had to emend all of them into the first edition, the copy-text, except any which were obvious blunders, such as typographical errors. Greg took a crucial half-step beyond McKerrow by realizing that an editor could discriminate among variants in later editions. Knowing that minor variants in wording will almost always occur in resetting, whether the compositor makes them deliberately or inadvertently, Greg suggested that an editor should evaluate the variants and reject any he thought were compositorial while adopting any he thought were authorial, whether he thought they improved the text or not. The point was to maximize the number of authorial readings adopted, and to take the chance of rejecting some more or less indifferent readings which might be authorial in order not to cram the text with a hoard of later variants many of which almost surely would not be authorial. It was wonderful in simple cases in which the original authorial wording, misprinted somehow in the first edition, was restored in some later edition, by the author or someone else, and it was wonderful when you wanted your text to contain the last revisions the author made in a given passage without straddling yourself with all the compositorial changes that had crept into a late printing.

Perfect in his advice on how best to incorporate authorial corrections and revisions while minimizing the risk of adopting non-authorial changes along with the corrections, Greg simply asserted, without debating the issue, that it is not up to the editor to decide whether or not authorial revisions are improvements but merely to decide whether or not they are authorial, and then to adopt them. Greg avoided, I now see, the basic difference between correction and revision, the former restoring an original intention and the latter embodying what may well be a new intention--one which seldom will take the whole of the work into account. The distinction was not immediately enforced upon the new American editors as an important one, for most people took for granted their agreement with Greg that an author had the right to do whatever he wanted to do to his text and that an editor's job was to present to the reader what the author's final intention was for any text. The inexperience of most of the new followers of Greg assured that no CEAA editor in the early 1960s would immediately identify the problematical nature of revisions as a major sticking point in the application of Greg's rationale. Objections were voiced only hesitantly, or else were briefly raised then blurred by the confused textual arguments which accompanied them. Nor was Greg's essay ever intruded upon the notice of literary critics, and literary theorists, for the rationale was published in the American bibliographical annual and Greg's arguments, in any case, were couched in terms of what an editor could do or might want to do, not in terms of what a literary critic or a literary theorist might do with the evidence behind the editorial decisions or with the product of such editing.

In the absence of serious discussion, Fredson Bowers acted as apostle for Greg's rationale in many speeches, essays, and editions, beginning even before he published the "Rationale" in his STUDIES IN BIBLIOGRAPHY in 1950 and accelerating in the 1960s about the time of the founding of the Center for Editions of American Authors. By the time he wrote the "Textual Criticism" essay for the 1963 MLA AIMS AND METHODS pamphlet he had firmly concluded that the "duty of an editor" was to edit according to Greg, "to synthesize the authority of the revised substantives with the authority of the original accidentals"; that is, to choose the first edition as copy-text (assuming no manuscript survived) and emend into it any words and even punctuation marks from a later edition which the editor decides are authorial. In "Scholarship and Editing" (1976) Bowers flatly asserted the triumph of eclectic editing according to Greg: "Opposition has been voiced to such eclectic texts by a small group of students of American literature who were not brought up under the discipline of textual criticism as developed for English literature; but the idea of a single composite final text as defined by Greg's theories seems both so practical and so rational a benefit to both to author and to reader as to admit of no controversy as a proposition, subject only to the caveat that a few literary texts exist in such special multiple revised forms as to resist conflation and to require either separate publication or the modified form of separate publication represented by parallel texts." In the 1970s G. Thomas Tanselle put his own constantly growing prestige in support of Greg's rationale--prestige built up, primarily, by his unrivaled series of magisterial essays in each year's volume of STUDIES IN BIBLIOGRAPHY. According to Tanselle in the 1975 essay, Greg's rationale of copy-text "would seem to apply to all situations," the only qualification to "its universality" being the rare problem which Bowers had identified as "radiating texts," variant texts all based on identical originals, as in the case of pieces published in various newspapers from the presumably identical proofs sent about by a newspaper syndicate. Otherwise, Tanselle said it was self-evident that Greg's "recommended procedure would serve in handling editorial problems involving manuscripts as well as printed books, arising in twentieth-century literature as well as sixteenth," and of course arising in those situations in other centuries as well.

In the decade and a half after the founding of the CEAA there was hardly any public argument against this orthodox belief that Greg's rationale was universally applicable--it was assumed that it WAS, although Bowers as early as 1963 in the Fielding edition was quietly reverting behind Greg's basic insight to McKerrow's imperfect position, incorporating compositorial and editorial changes from late editions along with authorial ones. Bowers continued to violate some of Greg's soundest principles in the Stephen Crane and William James editions, particularly the latter, where he elaborated a rationalization for repudiating Greg which obviated the need to transcribe the manuscripts. Of course, when I checked some of the holograph for PRAGMATISM in the Houghton I found that the original compositors had sometimes misread James's hand and that Bowers had preserved their errors by not using the manuscript (which HAD been printer’s copy) as copy-text or at least transcribing it accurately and consulting it during the editing process. Bowers's very long 1978 essay on "Greg's 'Rationale of Copy-Text' Revisited" must be understood as part of his ongoing rationalization of his expedient choices of copy-text and his expedient (and McKerrowesque) decisions to adopt far too many variants from particular late editions. Tanselle, more than the late Bowers, has carried the day, and in fact Greg's rationale has not been subjected to much skeptical challenge. I propose a fundamental challenge here.

It is easy enough to understand why Greg would have focused on evidence which could be derived from collation of texts: in his period, the Renaissance, he would very rarely have had much detailed evidence about the circumstances of composition and revision. And it is easy enough now to see why a rationale which focused on the author's ultimate intentions instead of the author's composing process would have found such favor as Greg's rationale did. The timing was uncannily propitious in this country--and it is important to remember that Greg's influence has predominantly been in this country, where it was first read (by someone else, for him) and where it was first published. The beginning of the 1950s was precisely the time when the theorists of the New Criticism had triumphed and the followers of the New Criticism were beginning to publish their explications of one literary text after another, focusing on the product they held in their hands, not on the process by which it reached that form. In practical terms this meant that graduate students were not only NOT being trained any more as biographical and textual researchers but that graduate students in some of the most prestigious schools were being actively deterred from doing biographical and textual research, especially into the creative process. Today it is hard to recapture the sense of disdain toward studies of the creative process which infused W. K. Wimsatt's and Monroe C. Beardsley's "The Intentional Fallacy.” John Livingston Lowes’s THE ROAD TO XANADU appalled them, perhaps because it seemed theoretically naĂŻve, perhaps because it seemed glibly over-confident in its dealing with sacred mysteries—perhaps because of other factors hard to recapture now. It is clear that Wimsatt and Beardsley were reacting against a swarm of irresponsible, sentimental, and impressionistic accounts of the composition of this work or that. Their hostility was enormously influential. It seems clear that Wimsatt, in particular, through his writings and his graduate seminars at Yale discouraged some of the best graduate students of the 1950s from study of literary creativity. He made it seem so boorish, gauche, and downright tacky that to engage in it must have marked you as unfit to come any closer to him than Bridgeport. I'm sounding a little extravagant, but you can see the results of his disdain in the writings of his student who became the foremost champion of authorial meaning, E. D. Hirsch. If you look carefully, you will see in VALIDITY IN INTERPRETATION a profound reluctance to dwell on accounts of the creative process or to dwell on evidences for authorial intentionality, for what the author must have meant. The dread in Hirsch, I suggest, is almost visceral. The more recent theorists have not felt such a sense of shame at handling a disgusting topic, but it is instructive to see what they do say about authorial intention. Notably, Jonathan Culler, in “Prolegomena to a Theory of Reading” (THE READER IN THE TEXT) rather than being uneasy with accounts of what an author meant, simply and very coolly advocates not bothering to try to find out what authors meant--the evidence is bound to be unreliable, anyhow, and there exists hard evidence much more interesting, the evidence about how readers have read literary works, evidence surviving in great abundance in the form of ever-fascinating critical essays.

We tend to talk about the gap between theory and practice, but in fact there is hardly any time lag between theory and practice. In the 1950s and 1960s, for instance, almost every critic of Henry James's revisions, almost every critic of Stephen Crane, was acting as a New Critic, although very rarely did a critic indicate that he or she knew something called literary theory existed. Not being trained as biographers and textual scholars. being at times trained NOT to be biographers and textual scholars, on principle. the critics of Henry James's revisions managed to abstract their essentially extrinsic topic from James's life, so that they could talk about authorial revisions as in effect intrinsic evidence, with no reference to James's life as he first composed a work or as he later revised it. It's an astonishing performance. They wrote on James's revisions of THE AMERICAN or whatever without ever compiling a literary log of the sequence of James's literary activities in 1905-1907 and therefore they never asked some of the most intriguing questions about the relationships of texts and revisions. And Crane critics such as James B. Colvert, when they found it necessary to make biographical comments, as all critics do, began to biographicize--that is, to make biographical comments on the basis not of the life but of the work--so that Colvert brutally batters Crane as a failed artist and a failed human being on the basis of the flaws in the Appleton text of THE RED BADGE OF COURAGE, never stopping to realize that the failures he is condemning have nothing to do with Crane's achievement but only result from what the editor at Appleton insisted that he take out. Colvert is absolutely correct in his analysis of what is wrong with the Appleton text, but cruelly wrong to blame Crane for it. You could show the same sort of thing with critics of the 1950s, 1960s, and later on any other writer you name. With the rarest of exceptions, critics avoided biographical evidence and tended to handle essentially biographical topics as if they were merely critical. So did theorists, including the very influential theorist of the 1970s, Michael Hancher, who in "Three Kinds of Intention" discussed authorial intention before beginning to compose, intention just after completing a work, and intention long after completing a work, but only in one footnote mentioned anything about authorial intention during the creative process.

The bibliographers and editors of the 1950s and 1960s were very much a part of their times. One could--I'm serious--write an essay on Fredson Bowers's affinities with the New Critics. In fact what Bowers made of Greg's rationale was a magic formula for editing literary works even when you were not an authority on the life of the author of those works. The formula made it easy to train many critics and the fewer available scholars to be CEAA editors, when the time came in the mid-1960s. If you were already a biographical scholar of the author you were going to edit, that wasn't held against your chances of learning fast how to apply Greg's rationale, but editing was very often promoted as a skill which any good technician could master and apply to any old textual situation, whoever the author was. Hence the advent of young free-lance Bowers-trained textual editors in quest of a CEAA Edition. Hence Bowers's elbowing aside the Crane specialist who had expected to be general editor of the Crane edition so he could become the general editor himself. Now, I can't say what Ed Cady would have done as an editor, except that he is on record as saying he wouldn't have messed up MAGGIE, but I think one can be pretty sure that a Crane scholar would not have made some textual blunders which Bowers made merely because he did not know the field--did not know that a pre-publication excerpt from THE RED BADGE OF COURAGE had been reported several times, did not read catalogues of collections which listed important letters which the editors of the collected letters had missed, and so on. In many of the CEAA editions the accounts of composition and revision did not bulk very large when compared to the space devoted to hypotheses about compositorial stints, multiple typescripts and carbons, and frequently unprincipled principles for regularizing the punctuation and spelling.

In this period when editorial theorists and editors avoided talking about the writer during the creative process as much as literary theorists and literary critics did, you could still find an aesthetician like Murray Krieger who would discuss the creative process, but in recent years the most valuable contributions have come from the clinical psychiatrist Albert Rothenberg, especially in his EMERGING GODDESS. What Rothenberg shows on the basis of his clinical studies is obvious when you think about it a moment: the creative process really is a process--which means that like any other process it begins, continues, as Rothenberg shows, with varying admixtures and varying sequences of excitement, arousal, boredom, anxiety, and determination, then ends, ends with stubborn finality. The process is physiological as well as psychological, intellectual, and aesthetic, and since the process involves such physical and mental strain the writer tends, Rothenberg shows, to put it out of mind as soon as possible. Many writers are driven by inner compulsion or external circumstances into an immediate repetition of the whole exalting and exhausting process, turning at once to the composition of a new work, often even before the old one is quite finished. We can go to any number of writers for testimony as to the finality with which they end the creative process. What they say (about dreading to look at the work again or hardly being able to bear the thought of it again) comes out to mean the same thing, whether they go at it like Henry James and talk of expelling a work from the mind or like Joyce Carol Oates and talk of the work's expelling her from it. With the rarest of exceptions, writers lose control of a literary work very soon after completing it and can very rarely regain control over it when they want to revise it, weeks or years later. Of course most writers tend to think they can intervene in their texts without disturbing anything except the particular passage they want to disturb, but their later alterations to their texts tend to disrupt their original achievements without achieving any new unity. No matter how sophisticated they are in literary techniques, writers almost never are able to foresee what their interventions into a completed text will cause. They have lost control, once the creative process was passed. And it is precisely this natural tendency of writers to lose control of a literary work once they have finished it that Greg's rationale makes no allowance for. Rationally, rationalistically, Greg assumes that a writer's control over his work lasts as long as he lives. And this seems both modest and reasonable. It's the author's work. isn't it? Who is a mere humble editor to quarrel with Mark Twain for agreeing to drop the raftsmen episode from HUCKLEBERRY FINN? Who is the editor to go against Crane's own willingness to cooperate with the Appleton editor's desire to cut certain controversial passages from THE RED BADGE OF COURAGE and MAGGIE? Yet the modern editor may often identify more accurately the author's achieved unity in a literary work than the author did and will often display more principled respect for that achievement than the author did. Simply because they are human beings, not machines, writers cannot retain complete aesthetic, intellectual, and economic control over every work they write, as long as they live. Greg’s rationale, wonderful as it is in the simplest cases of single-word corruptions corrected later on, is useless in any complicated editorial situation, useless once textual revisions are involved instead of corrections and restorations of lost readings. So I shouldn't have said I months ago that I would talk about the irrationality of Greg's rationale but instead about its excessive, and inhuman, rationality. Greg’s “The Rationale of Copy-Text” simply is incompatible with what we know about the creative process, about human memory, about human psychology, and about what we know that real writers are willing to do or let someone else do to their works, once the creative process has ended.
[NOTE: I scanned this from a fanfold printout with perforated borders for posting here. In 1981 Stanley J. Idzerda came up to me after my talk in Madison, Wisconsin, saying, "You certainly blew Greg out of the water." I was taken aback, for I was still thinking of qualifying Greg, not refuting him, but in the following months I sharpened my criticisms into this demonstration of the great but limited virtues and the greater inapplicability of W. W. Greg's "The Rationale of Copy-Text."]